Poetry

love is a place
& through this place of
love move
(with brightness of peace)
all places

yes is a world
& in this world of
yes live
(skilfully curled)all worlds

I picked this poem because its simple and pretty easy to understand. I like the fact that E.E. Cummings says move through love as if it were a place. And when in that place move with brightness of peace. The title is pretty basic but works for the poem, it tells you that love is a place, and thats what the poem is about. I think that E.E. uses imagery in this poem because he sets up love, and yes as a place in his poem. It may seem almost impossible to visualize such a general thing but he is making you imagine. There is a pretty nuetral tone in this poem, I did get a sense that E.E. is trying to just give his reader's advice about life rather then make them feel a real tone to the poem.

Narative Passage

"When I met someone in particular, I changed in a big way." - This is my second sentance in the whole essay, and I think that it should have better word choice. Does anyone have any ideas on how I could improve this?

Blog 1

I don't know what to write about so I am going to ramble about some things. First, I like to drive fast cars because its fun. I learned how to drive in a stick shift car when i was 13 and i drive a VW Jetta and a Chevy S10, they are both sticks. I love music and ended up spending a rediculous amount of money on a soundsystem in my S10. I bought a new deck, 2 alpine 6inch speakers and a Bazooka tube for behind my seat. It was alot of money but it was worth it. I got a deck with an Aux. Port so that i can plug in my ipod. My ipod is one of my favorite things, i have over 8,500 songs. I spend hours a day listening to music.